Quick Write : My family and being able to breathe is what makes life worth living for me .
3 observations : I noticed that the computer is talking for the man
I also noticed that the man needed special help .
He can only move one eye .
2 questions : Does the man ever think about what life would be like if he was normal ?
How does he communicate with anyone other then with a computer ?
1 emotion : heartbroken , because its really sad from being able to do everything to being able to anything at all .
Reflection : Helping is what makes life worth living . Being able to lend a hand to people in need . achieving is another working towards, and achieving goals, no matter what those goals are. And always growing , Learning new things, improving my knowledge and ability in the things I’ve already learned.
This was a graded post. Beautiful, but don't forget to capitalize the first word in each sentence.
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